{"id":290236,"date":"2023-06-08T07:27:18","date_gmt":"2023-06-08T03:27:18","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/?p=290236"},"modified":"2023-06-08T07:27:18","modified_gmt":"2023-06-08T03:27:18","slug":"essay-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/2023\/06\/08\/essay-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"Essay Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Year-to-Date: 852.9; May 2023: 43.2; Last Week: 40.4<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">This week students published and celebrated writing a <a href=\"https:\/\/drive.google.com\/drive\/folders\/1uRdYGE5_gE6FdktGZKz5VbKwY3SMQUOu?usp=drive_link\">research-based argument essay<\/a>. Whilst drafting, students annotated an <a href=\"https:\/\/drive.google.com\/file\/d\/1ysduPN1iF9pIQDdvMNt83fEY_lb9Lwcs\/view?usp=drive_link\">exemplar<\/a> to raise the level of their writing. Whilst revising, students analyzed a peer&#8217;s work using a <a href=\"https:\/\/drive.google.com\/file\/d\/1vOGhdfp6dPxDzKoh-W3QEE1z3OXLTc3G\/view?usp=drive_link\">checklist <\/a>before providing feedback. Whilst editing, students used the same checklist to fine tune and polish their writing. Then, I used a <a href=\"https:\/\/drive.google.com\/file\/d\/1leIyPRM5LlQK83MI-Y8jGh78Ew8npxXi\/view?usp=drive_link\">rubric<\/a> to assess each student&#8217;s writing. After a plenary session this morning, students realized how their self-assessment might or might not have been in line with both a peer&#8217;s and teacher&#8217;s feedback. Which begs the question: How did your child(ren) grow as a writer throughout this process?<\/p>\n<p>Using the posters that hung on the walls of our learning space as a guide, take a moment to consider what your child(ren) accomplished.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/17\/2023\/06\/How-to-Write-an-Argument-1-scaled.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-290266 lazyload\" data-src=\"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/17\/2023\/06\/How-to-Write-an-Argument-1-238x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"238\" height=\"300\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml;base64,PHN2ZyB3aWR0aD0iMSIgaGVpZ2h0PSIxIiB4bWxucz0iaHR0cDovL3d3dy53My5vcmcvMjAwMC9zdmciPjwvc3ZnPg==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 238px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 238\/300;\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Students focused on a food-related topic to persuade themselves and their audience to take action.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/17\/2023\/06\/Persuasive-Techniques-to-Sway-an-Audience-1-scaled.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-290269 lazyload\" data-src=\"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/17\/2023\/06\/Persuasive-Techniques-to-Sway-an-Audience-1-239x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"239\" height=\"300\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml;base64,PHN2ZyB3aWR0aD0iMSIgaGVpZ2h0PSIxIiB4bWxucz0iaHR0cDovL3d3dy53My5vcmcvMjAwMC9zdmciPjwvc3ZnPg==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 239px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 239\/300;\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Students choose a thesis or a claim with reasons to engage their audience.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><a href=\"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/17\/2023\/06\/Common-Flaws-in-Reasoning-scaled.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-290249 lazyload\" data-src=\"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/17\/2023\/06\/Common-Flaws-in-Reasoning-237x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"237\" height=\"300\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml;base64,PHN2ZyB3aWR0aD0iMSIgaGVpZ2h0PSIxIiB4bWxucz0iaHR0cDovL3d3dy53My5vcmcvMjAwMC9zdmciPjwvc3ZnPg==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 237px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 237\/300;\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Students researched and took notes about a food-related topic to choose, analyze, include, and angle the evidence.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/17\/2023\/06\/Questions-to-Help-Writers-Analyze-Evidence-1-scaled.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-290259 lazyload\" data-src=\"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/17\/2023\/06\/Questions-to-Help-Writers-Analyze-Evidence-1-237x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"237\" height=\"300\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml;base64,PHN2ZyB3aWR0aD0iMSIgaGVpZ2h0PSIxIiB4bWxucz0iaHR0cDovL3d3dy53My5vcmcvMjAwMC9zdmciPjwvc3ZnPg==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 237px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 237\/300;\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Students concluded their piece of writing by focusing on how they and their audience might be the change they want to see in the world.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/17\/2023\/06\/How-to-Conclude-a-Research-Based-Argument-Essay-scaled.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-290251 lazyload\" data-src=\"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/17\/2023\/06\/How-to-Conclude-a-Research-Based-Argument-Essay-237x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"237\" height=\"300\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml;base64,PHN2ZyB3aWR0aD0iMSIgaGVpZ2h0PSIxIiB4bWxucz0iaHR0cDovL3d3dy53My5vcmcvMjAwMC9zdmciPjwvc3ZnPg==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 237px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 237\/300;\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Year-to-Date: 852.9; May 2023: 43.2; Last Week: 40.4 This week students published and celebrated writing a research-based argument essay. Whilst drafting, students annotated an exemplar to raise the level of their writing. Whilst revising, students analyzed a peer&#8217;s work using a checklist before providing feedback. Whilst editing, students used the same checklist to fine tune [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":967,"featured_media":290253,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_et_pb_use_builder":"","_et_pb_old_content":"","_et_gb_content_width":"","wds_primary_category":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[28],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-290236","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-grade-5"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/290236","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/967"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=290236"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/290236\/revisions"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/290253"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=290236"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=290236"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=290236"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}