{"id":22160,"date":"2014-09-17T16:31:41","date_gmt":"2014-09-17T12:31:41","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/?p=22160"},"modified":"2014-09-17T16:31:40","modified_gmt":"2014-09-17T12:31:40","slug":"grade-six-authors-drafting-away","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/2014\/09\/17\/grade-six-authors-drafting-away\/","title":{"rendered":"Grade Six Authors Drafting Away"},"content":{"rendered":"<p> This week in writer&#39;s workshop, students in grade 6 are  working on their first piece of writing for the year, a narrative.<\/p>\n<div class=\"separator\" style=\"clear: both; text-align: none;\">&nbsp;<\/div>\n<p>Last week we focused on pre-writing, and we looked at ways we could generate ideas  to write about. This week, we&#39;ve settled on our idea and we&#39;ve begun drafting. <\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>During one of our mini-lessons, we analyzed a piece of writing that we did last week to check to see if there was balance in our writing.  We realized that our writing tended to be heavily action-based, with very little dialogue and character thought, so we&#39;ve focused on making our characters talk and think all throughout our writing.<\/p>\n<p>The drafting has improved greatly with this little tip, and our narrative pieces are coming along well.  Ask your child to share what they&#39;ve been working on. Even if it&#39;s not yet completed, it&#39;s good to share our writing with and receive feedback from as many different sources as possible.<\/p>\n<p>Speaking of sharing, we had a great sharing session on Wednesday, with Courtney, Claire, Jade, Lotus, and Trina sharing their progress with the room.  (I know, no boys names yet, but hopefully next week they&#39;ll be risk-takers and take a step forward.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div class=\"separator\" style=\"clear: both; text-align: none;\">&nbsp;<\/div>\n<div class=\"separator\" style=\"clear: both; text-align: none;\"><a href=\"http:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/09\/wpid-Photo-20140917162030.jpg\" target=\"_blank\" style=\"\"><img decoding=\"async\" data-src=\"http:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/09\/wpid-Photo-20140917162030.jpg\" id=\"blogsy-1410957101685.6958\" class=\"alignnone lazyload\" width=\"500\" height=\"500\" alt=\"\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml;base64,PHN2ZyB3aWR0aD0iMSIgaGVpZ2h0PSIxIiB4bWxucz0iaHR0cDovL3d3dy53My5vcmcvMjAwMC9zdmciPjwvc3ZnPg==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 500px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 500\/500;\"><\/a><\/div>\n<div class=\"separator\" style=\"clear: both; text-align: none;\"><a href=\"http:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/09\/wpid-Photo-201409171620301.jpg\" target=\"_blank\" style=\"\"><img decoding=\"async\" data-src=\"http:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/09\/wpid-Photo-201409171620301.jpg\" id=\"blogsy-1410957101617.2273\" class=\"alignnone lazyload\" width=\"500\" height=\"500\" alt=\"\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml;base64,PHN2ZyB3aWR0aD0iMSIgaGVpZ2h0PSIxIiB4bWxucz0iaHR0cDovL3d3dy53My5vcmcvMjAwMC9zdmciPjwvc3ZnPg==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 500px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 500\/500;\"><\/a><\/div>\n<div class=\"separator\" style=\"clear: both; text-align: none;\"><a href=\"http:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/09\/wpid-Photo-20140917163039.jpg\" target=\"_blank\" style=\"\"><img decoding=\"async\" data-src=\"http:\/\/abisoman.com\/broadcaster\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/09\/wpid-Photo-20140917163039.jpg\" id=\"blogsy-1410957101632.0857\" class=\"alignnone lazyload\" width=\"500\" height=\"373\" alt=\"\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml;base64,PHN2ZyB3aWR0aD0iMSIgaGVpZ2h0PSIxIiB4bWxucz0iaHR0cDovL3d3dy53My5vcmcvMjAwMC9zdmciPjwvc3ZnPg==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 500px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 500\/373;\"><\/a><\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div class=\"separator\" style=\"clear: both; text-align: center;\">&nbsp;<\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>This week in writer&#39;s workshop, students in grade 6 are working on their first piece of writing for the year, a narrative. &nbsp; Last week we focused on pre-writing, and we looked at ways we could generate ideas to write about. 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